Xian Ni Chapter 54 – Entering the Stage (4)

ObligatoryTLNote: To those who have been saying that due to my death march the quality has decreased, I humbly apologize, but all I ask of you is to tell me the paragraphs or areas where the quality decreased so I can get it edited, I could only get Goodguyperson’s help for the starting few chapters. I would be more than happy to get the offending paras rechecked if you can point them out though. Anyways, keep on keeping on.


Comparing it to the fountain at the backside of the mountain, Zhang Kuang noticed the difference. not only was it several times rich in LingQi this spring water also had a concealed magical effect, after he analyzed it a bit, shocked to discover that this spring water could stop aging!

If taken regularly, can definitely stay young, but even with a few drops, he immediately felt the difference. After this amazing discovery, he had immediately acted.

It is known amongst the XiuZhen community, that only after reaching Yuan Ying stage, will one’s aging halt, but until then, hundreds and thousands of years would have passed in reaching that stage.

Zhang Kuang expected that with this LingQi spring water, if word of this gets out to other Sects, then in particular those female seniors who are at the Foundation Building stage or JieDan stage, will definitely go crazy after it.

But when he went to check, he had already lost track of Wang Lin, in the huge Heng Yue Sect, He probed many disciples one by one, but could not find anyone similar.

Due to this, he was depressed for a long time, he had also probed Wang Lin but he turned out to be trash at third layer of Concentrating Qi, Zhang Kuang thought that he would not have such a treasure, so after a little while, also put him out of his mind.

Now, he was very sure that that person was definitely Wang Lin, not for any other reason but a hunch!

“This Wang Lin has used it for his cultivation, alas, I did not have this idea earlier, oh the secret of this LingQi spring water, I must bury it deep in my heart and no matter what, not let Wang Lin, must not allow him to see, otherwise, this XiuZhen community is too cruel, let alone disciples, even blood brothers would kill each other. With Wang Lin’s level of cultivation, I do not have the strength to hit back!” Zhang Kuang decided immediately not to provoke this Wang Lin.

At the same time, his mind could not help but think of the time of the practice camp behind the heng yue mountain, he had thought that he hadn’t even reached the first layer, so gave him a ride to the cave, but how did Wang Lin arrive at this level, who knows, he was wracking his mind over it.

Especially at the time of drawing water from the mountain river, thinking of it, Zhang Kuang could not help but let out a cold sweat, I am glad that I only had doubts but didn’t act on them, otherwise would have been certainly beheaded.

He was trying to think up reasons how Wang Lin got so powerful, but Zhang Kuang immediately cancelled the thought, he realized that if he continued to go down that route, it would lead to him throwing his life away.

Senior Zhang who had repeatedly lectured Wang Lin to practise sincerely, was now feeling quite strange inside, he looked at Wang Lin on the stone platform and thought desolately: “This Wang Lin, I brought him from the Wang mansion myself, he was clearly an ordinary teenager, and later he attempted suicide, but was saved, in this short period of five years, everything has changed, he actually became a true disciple of Heng Yue Sect and now a prime master, was really destined for good fortune, unlike me, I practised for more than ten years, only reached sixth layer of concentrating qi, alas.”

The Xuan Dao Sect crowd, was surprised until then, but it was now shocked.

Zhou Peng, first loss can be explained by carelessness, second even, but third loss too, each time, he was sent flying in one direct hit, simply unable to fight back, especially the third when he had used the paper talisman to increase his cultivation level, but still was taken down.

That had put, everyone in Xuan Dao Sect in a deeply shocked state.

Liu Feng mouth stayed open, for a long time even forgot to breathe, he was now absolutely positive, this Heng Yue’s Wang Lin was absolutely fierce, Senior was not careless, but was clearly inferior, especially when he thought, how Senior was at twelfth layer of Concentrating Qi, then what layer was Wang Lin at…..

“Is he on the Foundation Building stage?” Liu Feng muttered in disbelief.

Wang Lin was made fun of when he was tasked with feeding the giant centipede, the Ouyang girl, this time was stunned, her mind could not comprehend seeing that Senior, to actually lose…..

Liu Mei’s eyes were sparkling, she was now even more interested in Wang Lin, secretly thought: “He really is a diamond in the rough, three days ago, I knew something was off, he was the first to recover from my technique.”

Several other disciples were all speechless, Senior was their hero, too powerful, but this powerful Senior were defeated by another person, and that too in a one-sided and overwhelming fashion, at that point, in Xuan Dao Sect disciple’s mind, regarding their Xian Shu, there wasn’t even a hint of self-confidence. [TLNote: Xian Shu means Immortal technique]

Old man Ouyang’s face and Heng Yue’s Huang Long Zhenren’s face were now totally reversed, Ouyang old man was bitter, glancing deeply at Wang Lin, he was shocked to the core, with his strength at the fourteenth layer of Concentrating Qi, he could see Wang Lin’s level to be at third layer of Concentrating Qi.

“He……Is he really Heng Yue Sect disciple…….Did he reach the Foundation building stage or what, how can’t I see through his cultivation!”

The two elders also looked gloomy, Zhou Peng had tried three times, so now they were thoroughly convinced of Wang Lin’s strength.

Then a Xuan Dao Sect disciple, suddenly whispered: “What……What kind of magic did he use? And why does it feel similar to Gravity technique?”

“Gravity technique? Impossible, it is merely a low-level spell, how could it have such great power, i think, this must be a lost ancient spell, you see he acted so casually, seemingly like Gravity technique, actually it is only to cover up the truth about the ancient magic! Wang Lin is too cunning!” A disciple standing next to him sternly yet enthusiastically arranged things analytically.

“I can see how it is similar to Gravity technique, ah, this move I can do also, I also frequently practise, sometimes can slap out of control, if it could be controlled, could make objects fly, how it flies……… just like Senior did.” Another disciple said hesitatingly, but after a word his voice diminished and was swept away.

“Dream on, with your strength also want to compare with Wang Lin, If you ask me this is definitely not gravity technique, definitely not!” Another disciple said carefully, stroking his chin.

Other disciples were also engaged in discussing what kind of magic Wang Lin used, some even directly asked the three Elders.

Old man Ouyang and the two Elders forcing a smile and sighed, before saying in a sinking voice: “It’s not Gravity technique, I have never heard of such tremendous gravitational power, If I am not mistaken, this should be the long lost Capturing Dragon Hands technique!”

“Capturing Dragon Hand! !” The two elders standing nearby had weird expressions, this Capturing Dragon Hand, they had never heard of, but they also could not see what magic Wang Lin used, after all, this technique was too much like Gravity technique.

Old man Ouyang sighed inwardly and thought inwardly: “Naturally, I can’t tell the others that I don’t know what technique he used, I would lose face, so could only carelessly string together complicated words to make out a random technique name.”

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78 thoughts on “Xian Ni Chapter 54 – Entering the Stage (4)

    • WHOOP WHOOP Like da sound of the chapters April 19, 2015 / 10:20 pm

      lol x2

      • JackBJ April 26, 2015 / 7:49 pm

        lol x3
        Ouyang is such a troll XD

      • Life June 29, 2015 / 11:06 am

        lol x∞

  1. ryuketsu April 19, 2015 / 9:34 pm

    Thank ya very much for the translation, translator! Many thanks towards the Author!

  2. HeyThere April 19, 2015 / 9:35 pm

    DUDE YOU ARE FAST!

  3. rizqi April 19, 2015 / 9:38 pm

    I wont say take a rest or wanting for more chapters, but seriously thank you very much.

  4. Tengeh April 19, 2015 / 9:38 pm

    Thanks for the hard work! πŸ˜‰

  5. Tibet101 April 19, 2015 / 9:38 pm

    DUDEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE OMMMMMMMMMMMGGG i was just refreshing randomly this morning after each chapter….and every time theres a new chapter……….your a god…..thank you so much

  6. Lantor Spanel - Not a Fake Name April 19, 2015 / 9:40 pm

    Thanks for the chapter!

    All hail the marathonier!

  7. jeoshinweed April 19, 2015 / 9:41 pm

    Keep on Keeping on!! (Aldnoah Zero soundtrack?)

    Thanks! πŸ˜€

  8. xanius1 April 19, 2015 / 9:41 pm

    Lol Capturing Dragon Hand when he’s knocking people away

  9. azyrion April 19, 2015 / 9:42 pm

    OMG if it ever comes out that he can only use gravity technique people will faint left and right xD

  10. henrywolf123 April 19, 2015 / 9:43 pm

    lol that random technique naming by mr. elder man

  11. koldflame April 19, 2015 / 9:44 pm

    Ha ha ha; I actually laughed out loud when I read the last sentence! Thanks for the chapter!

  12. Tibet101 April 19, 2015 / 9:46 pm

    lol gg they think he’s using some ancient skill! when they can all use gravity tech lol gg

  13. THANKSTHANKSTHANKS April 19, 2015 / 9:46 pm

    quality is fine to me

  14. Vivec April 19, 2015 / 9:46 pm

    Dude. You’re definitely on a rampage today. You can do this. You can break us with sheer volume of chapters. Slightly lower quality shouldn’t be enough to make it hard to read unless people are far too hypersensitive.

    Thanks for the chapters!

  15. Silchas April 19, 2015 / 9:47 pm

    *Ding!*
    By disregarding your personal well-being and pushing your mind and body beyond the normal limits of what is possible when it comes to translation, you have unlocked a new ability!
    You have learnt the skill DeathMarch!
    DeathMarch: this is a channelled ability. For every hour spent channelling DeathMarch, you must complete a Willpower and Stamina check. For every hour that DeathMarch is active, the user loses 5d4% Stamina AND Willpower. This effect stacks every hour. DeathMarch will be cancelled upon the first failed Stamina/Willpower roll.
    DeathMarch Beginner Lvl 5 (35%)

    We’re with you in spirit. Keep grinding those skills! 😹

  16. Tensaiz April 19, 2015 / 9:48 pm

    *Uses Capturing Dragon Hand to obtain more chapters*

  17. Dain April 19, 2015 / 9:48 pm

    LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!

  18. woot April 19, 2015 / 9:49 pm

    damn dude thanks for the chapters!

  19. Sindaregion April 19, 2015 / 9:51 pm

    Thank you so much, this is amazing!!!

  20. stazh April 19, 2015 / 9:51 pm

    “I fear not the man who has practiced 10,000 kicks once, but I fear the man who has practiced one kick 10,000 times.” – Bruce Lee

    Wang Lin actually spend like what? 30-40 years practising Gravity Technique. That’s scary!

  21. pr0fess0rx April 19, 2015 / 9:52 pm

    holy molly. seriously..you’re too awesome man.

  22. mrkeper April 19, 2015 / 9:52 pm

    Translating faster then the speed of light, thanks !

  23. afraz April 19, 2015 / 9:53 pm

    ye GODS you are the MAN, the MYTH, the LEGEND!!!!!! seriously i love you right now …. (no homo lol) …just so many chapters it moves my heart… *sniffle* *a single tear drop rolls down my check* (to be frank i don’t give 2 shit’s about the lower quality)

  24. Vudoodude April 19, 2015 / 9:53 pm

    “That technique! It must be the Super Duper Flying Phoenix Burning Mega Ching Chong Punch Technique!”

    Thanks for the chapter! I’ve been reading the raws (machine translated), but they are brutal (and I’ve read coiling dragon, battle through the heavens, combat continent and desolate era raws). I haven’t noticed any change in quality even during this death march! I don’t comment often, but I really wanted to say thanks!

  25. Silverstar April 19, 2015 / 9:53 pm

    Those who said the quality has decreased, i said to them they can be go to hell!
    Seriously, you make a good translation. All i can do is thank you very much to share Xian Ni with us.
    Again, thank you very much for the translation πŸ™‚

  26. damightyjex April 19, 2015 / 9:54 pm

    If you had a worship button I would press it XD

  27. Reborn April 19, 2015 / 9:55 pm

    Thanks ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ πŸ™‚

  28. alkaml April 19, 2015 / 9:55 pm

    thank youu… i cant say anymore….

  29. Greed April 19, 2015 / 9:58 pm

    Death March ftw… wish we can give u some pizza and beer for u to eat and drink πŸ˜€

  30. Gren April 19, 2015 / 10:01 pm

    Hahaha! Giving a random name because he doesn’t want to lose face for not knowing.
    Thanks for the hilarious chapter and for all the previous chapter. You’re on fire!

  31. Alvin John April 19, 2015 / 10:02 pm

    waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa…i wantto cry ='( manymany thanks… can’t say further gratitude for awesome translation ^_^

    REST!!!!!!!!! you nid rest!!!!!

  32. MirrorDefense April 19, 2015 / 10:02 pm

    thanks for the chapter

  33. Leo April 19, 2015 / 10:06 pm

    Thanks a lot for your translations.
    You might be the only current translator to dish out so many chapters in a single day.
    Really appreciate it………

  34. markusplaymobile April 19, 2015 / 10:06 pm

    That last sentence πŸ˜€
    Keep it going ! Thank you !

  35. sinsi April 19, 2015 / 10:08 pm

    Lolworthy chapter. Their reactions!!! πŸ˜€

  36. buzzbannana April 19, 2015 / 10:11 pm

    WE LOVE YOU AND GIVE ALL OUR SUPPORTTTT

  37. jacobpaige April 19, 2015 / 10:13 pm

    I wonder if anyone will bother to ask him what technique he used? And what he’ll tell them πŸ˜‰

  38. Zealeous April 19, 2015 / 10:15 pm

    wait on the docs it says 55 is also done, does that mean it’ll also be released today? and thnx for chapter have not slept because must worship, much needed!

  39. nasirlordno1nasir April 19, 2015 / 10:16 pm

    i started reading this novel yesterday and today i am fully addicted. :).thank for the translation.
    Also can you make a GLOSSARY OF PEOPLE for this novel because this novel have many similar name some times i get confused.

  40. Trueman April 19, 2015 / 10:20 pm

    It’s more like grammatical errors than mispellings tho.

    ie.
    But when he went to check, he had already lost track of Wang Lin, in the huge Heng Yue Sect, probed many disciples one by one, but could not find anyone similar.

    But when he went to check, he had already lost track of Wang Lin, in the huge Heng Yue Sect, He probed many disciples one by one, but could not find anyone similar.

    • voidtranslations April 19, 2015 / 10:35 pm

      Ok, I changed it. I might give the chapters a do over once I find the time though..

      • wriess April 19, 2015 / 10:43 pm

        “Old man Ouyang sighed inwardly and thought inwardly” Here’s another one you can easily fix. If you remove one inwardly, it doesn’t change the meaning but it flows much better.

  41. fidelc123 April 19, 2015 / 10:25 pm

    All hail the translator! I think i am addicted to Xian Ni…

  42. nefarian3339 April 19, 2015 / 10:26 pm

    Thanks for the chapter!

  43. Mangochic April 19, 2015 / 10:28 pm

    Thanks for the chapter and the quality is still fine.

    The elder randomly naming a technique he doesn’t know to seem wise, lol. I’m hoping Wang Lin announces its the gravity techniques and the elder looses face.

    I hope cousin Wang Huo can be saved.

  44. Odain April 19, 2015 / 10:32 pm

    Wow so many chapters…..

    Thank you.

  45. Nevermind April 19, 2015 / 10:34 pm

    The quality is alright. It’s just sometimes difficult to comprehend the text due to the constant change of perspective.

  46. berserker703 April 19, 2015 / 10:36 pm

    You are right it feels like every chapter is a cliff hanger gawd I NEED MOREEEE thanks again for your death march

  47. justafan April 19, 2015 / 11:41 pm

    This is tooo goood. Thank you

  48. Jason Chen April 20, 2015 / 1:42 am

    I must attest, your quality due to your death march hasn’t really decreased at all, it’s just that, there’s a lot of new complicated developments in wording especially

    • Dauntes April 22, 2015 / 12:10 pm

      This is my point of view as well.

  49. totokkk April 20, 2015 / 3:31 am

    Greaat, void-chan! You’re soooo impressive buddy. It may seem impolite, but can I ask you how much time you spent translating today? I’m so ashamed, I spend in average about maybe 1h/1h30 translating daily, because I am a lazy, I mean busy, guy, but when I see the crazy mass releases you can do, it makes me want to change. Really.

    Cheers,
    Your Toto.

    • voidtranslations April 20, 2015 / 8:47 am

      I had a lot of free time, I did two 6-8 hours sessions of TLing for these chapters, I guess, even I lost track of time at some point. And don’t worry you are awesome as you are also.
      Cheers
      Void

      • totokkk April 20, 2015 / 9:41 pm

        Oh I see thanks. I think you are faster than me in average then :x.

        I’m nowhere as awesome as you though. I think you’ve done the highest record of chapters translated from a Chinese novel released in a single day today. I’ve written it in my personal Guinness record book of the translation :D. One day, I’ll beat it. Hopefully. & If I am drugged enough on this day x).

      • voidtranslations April 20, 2015 / 9:54 pm

        Looking forward to that glorious day, maybe we can set a day aside as Translator Apocalypse where we all go crazy.

      • totokkk April 20, 2015 / 9:57 pm

        Hahaha I love your crazy ideas πŸ˜€ definitely a good idea. Preferably even schedule it a few weeks in advance, and on a holy day.

  50. Elsie April 20, 2015 / 3:35 am

    If only they knew that it was actually really gravity technique

  51. Lazy Crow April 20, 2015 / 5:11 am

    So skills is more important than cultivation level~ haha
    Nice chap, thanks for this~
    Good Day~ πŸ˜€

    • Taka April 20, 2015 / 5:10 pm

      of course. or more like using your abilities skillfully.
      he has gained one single ability, and when he couldn’t get any more, he just learned that one ability better than anyone ever thought of learning their own op abilities.

      thus the most useless ability became op enough to be of use…
      he’s been practicing it for quite many years though.

      • Lazy Crow April 20, 2015 / 7:05 pm

        I won’t call it “few” though~ He’s been training in it for 20+ years~ Well all of xinxia/wuxia novels have those things,
        skills > level~
        Good Day~ :3

  52. cooltjh4 April 20, 2015 / 5:19 am

    appreciate all your hard work man! thanks for the chapters. dont let the grammar nazis third reich your ass! your doing good work.

  53. Triopsate April 20, 2015 / 3:33 pm

    So that’s how they name skills eh? No wonder half of them sound like complete BS when you read them xD

  54. Abyssdarkfire July 5, 2015 / 11:07 pm

    Ouyang is to funny

  55. blackloveangel July 19, 2015 / 7:05 am

    Who is this, lady Zhou person

    • midoriha July 26, 2015 / 1:21 am

      Lady Zhou is the girl that Wang Zhuo is interested in/is chasing. Wang lin had also chatted with her before.

      Thanks for the chapter!

      • blackloveangel July 31, 2015 / 10:54 pm

        Really? Oh. Wow, i’m horrible with names. Thanks for the clarification

      • midoriha July 31, 2015 / 11:31 pm

        No problem! I know the feeling of being confused!

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